in the holidays me and my family went skiing up in Taupo. and met up with my friends family and we went skiing together. It was really fun he was called Ben pringle he goes to te mata school his dad slipped down a whole slop.
Great job Thomas. Maybe work on your punctuation I dont see capitals after full stops and slope is spelt wrong maybe see a speller but over all it was great.
well done Thomas I really liked your story next time you could describe who Ben is and put capital letters a the start of the story and after full stops.
Great job Thomas. Maybe work on your punctuation I dont see capitals after full stops and slope is spelt wrong maybe see a speller but over all it was great.
ReplyDeletewell done Thomas I really liked your story next time you could describe who Ben is and put capital letters a the start of the story and after full stops.
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